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I have just completed the B class cheklist for the Military History project and believe this to be a Start class article. I believe that it could be improved by addressing the following:
Referencing: for a successful B class review an article requires at least one in line citation per paragraph or block of information (more if multiple sources were used or if multiple assertions are made). Additionally, a list of references/sources would provide readers with more resources to verify the information in the article;
Coverage: the article could be expanded to discuss the development of the museum more. Currently the article does not state when the museum was opened/established.
Just a couple of ideas. If you would like more in depth comments on how the article could be improved, please consider adding the article WP:MHPR for peer review. When you feel that the article is ready for re-assessment, please add it to the list at WP:MHA. Hope this helps. — AustralianRupert (talk) 06:25, 29 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
