Talk:Hokersar

A fact from Hokersar appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 27 November 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the Hokersar wetland is the largest bird reserve in the Kashmir Valley?

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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 16:52, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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... that the Hokersar, a wetland conservation is the biggest bird reserve in the Kashmir Valley in India? Source: "Hokersar wetland is the biggest bird reserve in the Kashmir Valley" [1]
ALT0a: ... that the Hokersar, a wetland conservation reserve, is the biggest bird reserve in the Kashmir Valley of India? Source: "Hokersar wetland is the biggest bird reserve in the Kashmir Valley" [2]

Reviewed: Moriguchi Route

Converted from a redirect by Mehrajmir13 (talk). Self-nominated at 08:37, 7 November 2020 (UTC).[reply]

Article is new enough and long enough; created from a redirect, but doesn't directly copy information from the article targeted by the former redirect. There are no apparent copyright issues, it's neutral and doesn't appear to plagarise its sources. Hook is sourced to the indicated reference. I'd change it slightly, as there appears to be a word missing; I'd also change the second "in" to "of". It would be clearer to say "that the Hokersar, a wetland conservation area, is the biggest bird reserve in the Kashmir Valley of India? It looks like Mehrajmir13 needs to do a QPQ, then this is good to go. MeegsC (talk) 18:17, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MeegsC Thank you for the review and contributions to the article. I have added a revised hook. The subject being a "reserve" added instead of word "area". Regarding the QPQ, is not Moriguchi Route being counted as reviewed? MehrajMir (talk) 12:03, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This one is ready to go. Sorry Mehrajmir13, I'm not sure how I missed your review! MeegsC (talk) 15:01, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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@Mehrajmir13: Piling up all the sources at the end of each paragraph makes it difficult for readers to verify information. Please try to cite each fact as you go along. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 16:49, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Anyway the article has a small number of sources. MehrajMir (talk) 05:22, 15 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]