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Above-average competence is expected if you are to edit a controversial article —

  • Rajagopal, who heads HfHR — a competing NGO in the Hindu activism space in USA — and has been (unsuccessfully) sued by HAF, is not a proper source to use in the controversy section; neither is a propaganda paper from Turkey!
  • Mukta Joshi's recent report should have been used to buttress the already existing section on "pro-India advocacy" than create one, afresh, titled "Accusations of lobbying efforts to influence U.S. Policy". It ought to be obvious but do not write w/o reading what's already there in the article.
  • The content that was added to "Islamophobia allegations" is already covered — and notably, in a detailed manner — at the section on "Reception"; so, there was no need to create a subsection titled "Islamophobia allegations".
  • Clarion India and Sikh Coalition are not reliable sources. (I am yet to read the other source used to draft a section on the supposed targeting of American Sikh community.)

TrangaBellam (talk) 12:25, 27 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

+1. also WP:CONTROVERSY suggests against giant controversy sections Bluethricecreamman (talk) 14:33, 27 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
did not know clarion is nonRS. whoops Bluethricecreamman (talk) 14:35, 27 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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