Talk:Heike Friedrich (wheelchair basketball)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 23:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Let me return you a favor by reviewing your article. Thanks for all the copy edit. This may take some days.TheQ Editor (Talk) 23:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Needs to include about how Friedrich became disabled.
- No. There's a rule about not focusing on disabilities. So that information should not go in the lead. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Needs to include her place of birth.
It was also runner-up - it?
- The team. "It" is the correct pronoun. Changed to "The team". Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

wikilink Holger Glinicki
- Good old Holger. Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps update all her medals from the Achievements section in the "Medal Record" section. (It looks like she won more than two medals)
- Added European championships. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Might want to divide it into sections.
Needs to include something about her coach.
- Mentioned Holger Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
wikilink "Silver Laurel Leaf"
- Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
by a point should be by one point
- Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Wikilink the events if possible.
- They are linked earlier in the article. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Explain in more detail about the infobox image.
- What do you want to know? Laura took it at the Gliders and Rollers World Challenge in Sydney in July 2012. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Make the infobox image smaller maybe. (Although not necessary.) It's just taking away some space.
- Using the default size. Don't was to fix it at a specified size because that may cause problems for people with mobile devices. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

ref 5 is a dead link.
- Aaargh. To be expected I suppose. Removed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
You may want to look at some reviews for ref 8. The info should be okay but there may be possible malware. [1]
- How strange. The link points to here. Check your machine. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

All points addressed. Thanks for your review! Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Nice, I've helped you specified the image caption, now it's a GA.