Talk:Heaven (Beyoncé song)/GA1

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 22:55, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Although fan and media speculation hinted the song to be inspired by the singer's --> We don't need to mention that it was fan and media, just say it was speculation.
which received comparisons to the singer's own "Halo" (2008). --> which received comparisons to Beyonce's 2008 song, "Halo".
It lyrically describes the protagonist mourning the death of a beloved person by repeating a sentimental hook; many critics found its lyrics to be personal. --> It The personal lyrics describes the protagonist mourning the death of a beloved person by repeating a sentimental hook.
The music video for "Heaven" was directed by Todd Tourso and Beyoncé and released on the album on December 13, 2013. --> The music video for "Heaven" was directed by Todd Tourso and Beyoncé, and was released align side the album on December 13, 2013. (I'm 100% sure the videos were separate releases but could be bought together)
It was filmed in Puerto Rico and New York City starring the singer's captain dancer and long-time back-up dancer Ashley Everett. --> Does not make sense, clarify?
The clip shows the life of two best friends, portrayed by Beyoncé and Everett, seen together in various important moments of their lives. --> The clip shows important moments from the life of Beyoncé and Everett, who portray two best friends
As the song itself, the video was praised for its emotional scenes and acting as well as the religious undertones. --> Like the song, the video was...
The background image of Boots, can you use a cropped version? Also the image should be aligned right per MOS:IMAGES and should look towards the article.
Reference #1 is over cited in para 1 of background section.
Refernce #3 Crushable.com is a gross unreliable source. If you cannot find a better source about these "rumors" then it has to go.
Boots explained in a post to lyric website Genius that he could neither confirm nor deny speculations about the song's source of inspiration being Beyoncé's miscarriage, noting how each listener could interpret it in their own way. --> Boots explained that there were multiple connotations to the lyrics of the song. With website Genius, he clarified that he was not in a position to confirm the subject matter.

More to come... —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 12:56, 31 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@IndianBio: Everything

Done besides the image. I do not know how to do that. My love is love 07:27, 11 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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