Talk:Heartlines/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 21:40, 22 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Please add ALT text to the infobox image.
I have a question about this part (and record producer Joel Little, who assisted in its production.). The word “assisted” here makes me think that he worked with someone for the song’s production, but the infobox presents him as the only producer. I would clarify this in the sentence to avoid confusion.
For this part (It sound was compared to Lorde's album), “It” should be “Its”.

Please add ALT text to the image.
The image caption should be a period/full-stop.
Wouldn’t it be simpler just to say (New Zealand singer Lorde co-wrote “Heartlines”) for the image caption?
I have the same question about the “assisted” part here that I did in the lead.
I do not believe the “New Zealand singer” is necessary.
I am a little confused. This section makes it seem like the song is about a long distance relationship, which is different from this part in the lead (Its lyrics detail the hope left in a broken relationship).
I would include information about the Cheat Codes remix somewhere in the prose. Currently, it is only present in the infobox image caption and the tables in the track listing and release history sections. I would also add that other remixes were released (i.e. the acoustic, Mount, and Race Banyon ones).
I am uncertain about this sentence (Idolator's Carl Williott described Georgia's vocals as "smokey" and compared her cadence to those of Lorde while Pryor Stroud of PopMatters characterized them as a "weapon of pure emotional power and kinetic force”.). While I can understand how the Idolator part fits with this section, the PopMatters part reads more like a review and seems more appropriate for the reception section to me.
The genre is spelled two different ways in the article (i.e. synthpop and synth-pop). I would make sure to be consistent with one method.

I would recommend separating the chart performance sentences into its own paragraph.
For this sentence (The staff of music blog PopMatters gave the song an average rating of 6.25, based on four reviews), I do not believe the comma is necessary.
I would include information about the gold certification in this section.

I would add this section with a link to the MetroLyrics page as it is an official lyric provider.

Wonderful work with the article. Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 22 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: All taken care of! Thank you so much for picking this article up for review. De88 (talk) 23:24, 22 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for addressing everything. I will ✓ Pass this now. Aoba47 (talk) 00:07, 23 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]