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Reviewer: TbhotchTalk C. 18:24, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
  • Lead
is a pop song -> The infobox only says "Country pop"
Since Cyrus or Hannah Montana, if you will, is a pop singer, the song is pop. It would be redundant listing "Pop, country-pop" on the infobox since one of them is very broad and includes the other. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Ok. TbhotchTalk C. 18:45, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
as promotion for an episode of the same title the series' third soundtrack, -> missing word
 Done
reaching the top twenty in Norway and the United States. "He Could Be the One" peaked at number ten on the Billboard Hot 100, -> Should be reworded.
Why? Sounds fine to me. There isn't any repetition. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Forget this. TbhotchTalk C. 18:45, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Background
"He Could Be the One" co-written by -> "He Could Be the One" was co-written by
 Done
According to Allmusic, its genre has some teen pop influences -> source states that the soundtrack has teen pop influences, not the song
The soundtrack includes the song. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Ok. TbhotchTalk C. 18:46, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
He described Cyrus' vocals to be with a slight twang and husky.[6] -> Who?
Truitt. I changed "He" to "Truitt" and, in the last sentence, "Truitt" to "him". Is that O.K.? -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Ok. TbhotchTalk C. 18:46, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Chart performance
of the Billboard Hot 100 and any country -> of the Billboard Hot 100 or
 Done
and any country -> source does not say that
 Done
  • Music video
heart breaker -> heartbreaker
 Done
The song debuted and peaked at number ninety-nine on the Canadian Hot 100, -> source says 97
 Done
He Could Be the One" peaked at number sixty-eight on the Australian Singles Chart, -> According to the source or this it didn't enter to the chart.
I forgot that Australian-charts.com only supplies the top fifty positions. The charting position should be archived in Pandora. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:45, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
What is "Pandora"?. TbhotchTalk C. 19:30, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
It's an archive for charts in Australia. I'll make sure to look for the week corresponding to the song. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 01:35, 13 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
 Done
OK, only one thing and this'll pass (music video section). TbhotchTalk C. 02:46, 13 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

There are some comments, article on hold until June 18, 2010. TbhotchTalk C. 18:24, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

All done within seven days, meets GA criteria, so I have to say pass. TbhotchTalk C. 03:39, 13 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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