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GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:56, 5 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 01:56, 5 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

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  • An alt needs to be provided for the cover image
  • Stay consistent with your format of the flatlists
  • Remove the red links for "Nunca es Suficiente" and "Lo Que Construimos"

Lead

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Paragraph 1

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  • State that "Down to the Root" in English, like "(English: Down to the Root)"
  • Add ", recorded for her studio album, Hasta la Raíz (2015)."

Paragraph 2

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  • Expand this paragraph

Background

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  • The first sentence is kind of long, but I don't really see how you could shorten it
  • Remove '(Mexico)'; it's not necessary in the context
  • Change 'seven' to 'six' years

Writing and recording

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Paragraph 1

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  • Link 'Mexico'
  • The sentence that starts with "While recording demos..." is too long and includes too many clauses

Paragraph 2

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  • The lead sentence could be shortened; you don't have to include how they became friends during the recording process
  • Add an author to the Billboard source if available

Critical and commercial reception

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  • Separate these into two separate paragraphs; one for critical reception and another for commercial reception

Paragraph 1

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  • Change the lead sentence to "Upon its release, "Hasta la Raíz" received positive reviews from music critics."
  • Change 'coincident' to 'in agreement'

Paragraph 2

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  • Remove the link to "Nunca Es Suficiente"
  • Move each source in the second sentence to its respective statement (after each comma)

Music video

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  • Try adding a photo of the music video
  • Perhaps, add a small description of the music video as well

Track listing

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  • Remove the 'Writer(s)' and 'Producer(s)' section in the track listing; you've already labeled this information in the infobox above

Credits and personnel

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  • Remove the ';' from each credit
  • Use proper n dashes instead of hyphens

References

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  • [6] - Link iTunes store
  • [8] - Link Discogs
  • [12] - Link Billboard
  • [13] - Use a proper n dash
  • [13] - Link Spotify
  • [14] - Remove one of the 'Coffee and Saturday' inclusions
  • [16] - Use a proper n dash
  • [19] - Use a proper n dash
  • [20] - Use a proper n dash
  • [21] - Use a proper n dash
  • [22] - Use a proper n dash
  • [27] - Link Sony Music

End of GA Review:

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Another good article, but definitely needs some work before passing GA status. I will put the article on hold until problems and addressed and corrections are made. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 21:27, 5 March 2016 (UTC).[reply]