Talk:Haskelite/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 01:31, 4 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

1.

• "Michigan based" - Should be hyphenated

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:45, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• Can you add conversion templates for the distances in the article?

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:53, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• "brand trade name of "haskelite."" - Be consistent with the capitalization of Haskelite

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:02, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• "There was no ribs used in the building of the canoe." - Were, not was

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:07, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• " In 1927 the company" - I think there should be a comma after 1927

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• "A Haskelite specialty plywood designed for aircraft construction was invented in 1939 called Duramold" - "called Duramold" is a misplace modifier,

I think it should be between construction and was

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:38, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• Link formaldehyde and phenol

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:41, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• "Howard Hughs" - The standard spelling is Howard Hughes, use the standard spelling

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:03, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• "It's top speed" - remove the '

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:44, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

2.

• Publisher should be added for the Kane and Motor Body refs

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:50, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• Add publisher locations when known

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:04, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

3.

• Lead's a little short, but it's a short article, so I'd say it's sufficient

 Done - expanded. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:09, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

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• Should this really be in Category:Adhesives? It's made from adhesives, but it's not an adhesive itself.

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:44, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 00:49, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• @Hog Farm: All issues addressed. Can you take another look now. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:12, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

I added another conversion template for the temperature. Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 16:20, 5 May 2020 (UTC)