What is "filial piety"? Can that be changed to something easier to understand?
The lead could probably be split into two paragraphs for ease of reading.
Otherwise, everything looks perfect. Really interesting, well-written article. In my view all the issues from the previous review have been rectified. One thing I should note is that there shouldn't be a space between periods and references. I've fixed this, but you might like to remember in the future. I assume you'll clarify the little issue I've noted above, so I'll pass the article. Great work. Naerii12:30, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
