Talk:Harajuku Lovers Live/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: --Legolas ^(talk2me) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Hello. I will be reviewing this article for the GA criterias. First of all I will be reviewing against quick-fail criterias.

Prose

• Y --Legolas ^(talk2me) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Verifiability

• Y --Legolas ^(talk2me) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Check for disambiguation and other dubious wikilinks

• Y per. Please remove the disambiguations. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Fixed -- EA Swyer ^Talk _{Contributions} 15:23, 17 November 2009 (UTC)

Links validity check

• Y per this. The link from The Guardian changes path. Needs to be replaced with original link. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Fixed -- EA Swyer ^Talk _{Contributions} 15:28, 17 November 2009 (UTC)

GA review

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   Remove reference 4 to Rotten Tomatoes, those are by users and not professional. Done

   Reference 21, please make the [] brackets as {}. Then the reference won't be broken. Done

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   The image HollabackGirl.jpg needs to be made right as per MOS:IMAGES. Also please add alternate text for the images as per WP:ALT.

   Done both. The alt text on hollabackgirl was broken.

   Mmmmm still not exactly satisfied with the alt text. Expecially the two performance pictures doesnot give any info other than the blond lady singing in the microphone. Try Sticky & Sweet Tour and check how they added the alternate text. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 05:13, 24 November 2009 (UTC)

   How is that? I didn't know alt-text was supposed to be so detailed. -- EA Swyer ^Talk _{Contributions} 13:47, 24 November 2009 (UTC)

   It is supposed to give the reader who can't see the image, as much information as possible regarding the image. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 03:36, 25 November 2009 (UTC)

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Over all a good article. We are almost there. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 09:56, 23 November 2009 (UTC)

Fixed what you brought up. Thanks for the review. -- EA Swyer ^Talk _{Contributions} 13:29, 23 November 2009 (UTC)

We are ready to roll :) --Legolas ^(talk2me) 09:12, 1 December 2009 (UTC)