Talk:Har Mar Mall/GA2
GA Reassessment
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Yet another Carbrera article on a shopping mall in Minnesota.
- Intro is full of list cruft. Most of the stores mentioned in the intro are not mentioned elsewhere and do not seem notable on their own.
- One article source is Cinema Treasures, which is a user submitted directory. Another is a blogspot page. Neither is a RS.
- The Explore Minnesota link is 404 and seems to be a directory listing that has no relevance anyway.
- "it features massively wide hallways" - cite this quote
- "summer of 1962" - WP:SEASON
- Way too monotone in sentence structure. Everything is "In X, Y happened. In Z, A happened."
- The entire article is only one section. Surely there is more to say about the changes in stores and renovations? Look at how much material I got out of Swifton Center, and that mall died in the 80s.
tl;dr there's a lot to work on here. As @Carbrera: seemed to ignore the last GAN, I think this one is bound for delisting. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 01:03, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
- @TenPoundHammer: Are you ready to close this? 18:48, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Aircorn: Yeah, I think this one can be delisted now. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 23:13, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
- Sweet. Do you want me to do it? Aircorn (talk) 04:19, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Aircorn: if you'd like. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 21:36, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
- Sweet. Do you want me to do it? Aircorn (talk) 04:19, 26 October 2021 (UTC)