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Reviewer: Novice7 (talk) 10:43, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing the article. — Novice7 (talk) 10:43, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
- Basic checks
- No Dab links.
- One redirect link. Rolling Stone links change their address sometimes. Try archiving the link using WebCite and add it to the article (using "archiveurl" and "archivedate" field).
Done
- The cover art Image:Robyn - Hang with Me.jpg is a little big. Reduce it to 300 × 300 pixels.
Done
- The sound sample File:Robyn Hang with Me.OGG looks good.
Prose review will be added in shortly. — Novice7 (talk) 11:28, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
- Lead
- taken from her sixth studio album, Body Talk Pt. 2 – maybe year of the album should be included in brackets?
Done
- It was released as the album's lead single on 16 August 2010 in Sweden. – comma after "in"
Done
- An acoustic version of the song had previously been released on Body Talk Pt. 1 in June 2010. – is it "released"? Shouldn't it be "included"? Also, comma afrer Pt. 1
Done
- It also reached the top ten in Norway and on the US Hot Dance Club Songs chart. – better if you expand and write "United States" instead of US, as it is its first occurrence. Also, remove the "on" after "and".
Done
- Background
- "Hang with Me" was originally recorded by Klas Åhlund's ex-wife, Paola Bruna – ex-wife -> the-wife.
- Sorry, it is "then-wife". — Novice7 (talk) 06:16, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
- Comma after Stockcity Girl.
Done
- Maybe you should add something like "In an interview with Kyle Anderson of MTV Newsroom, Robyn said of the song.."
- I believe that quote was originally from Robyn's website. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
- It's okay then. — Novice7 (talk) 06:16, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
- Also, link Bonbon?
Done
- Last sentence of the paragraph "released" to "included" or "featured".
Done
- Composition
- The song carries similar "anthemic, emotional beats" of "Cry When You Get Older" from Body Talk Pt. 1,[7] and similar musical structure to that of the Pet Shop Boys. please rewrite.
Done
- As the lyrics of the song have been quoted, provide a source for that (as in In the chorus, Robyn sings "Just don't fall recklessly, headlessly in love with me.")
Done
- Critical reception
- He concluded, saying, "it would.. -> He concluded by saying that it would "quoted material excluding it would".
Done
- Is stereogum reliable? Can you find another review?
- Removed. Will see if I can find another review. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
- Chart performance
- Please provide references to show the song's debut (as in Denmark).
Done
- remove "chart" after Billboard.
Done
- Music video
- Again, stereogum.
- Removed. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
- Live performances
- She chose to perform the song because the show's producers asked for it a little re-write would be better :)
Done
- Tracklisting
- Provide language parameter for iTunes Store links
Done
- Credits
- Change the credits to [Person] – [credit]
- Is it necessary? Klas Åhlund did, like, everything on the song :P Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
- LOL! i totally misunderstood xD
Done. Pancake (talk) 13:13, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
- Lol, it's okay :D — Novice7 (talk) 06:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
- LOL! i totally misunderstood xD
- Charts
- Good
- References
- Ref 9 missing publisher (work =Rolling Stone)
- Ref 12 missing publisher
- Ref 29 same thing as above
- All done. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
Overall, a good article. — Novice7 (talk) 11:28, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
- Last comments
- Mention the duration of the sample on the description (like A 22-second sample).
Done
- I actually started liking the song. It's a great article. Just look through and see that all errors are fixed. I'll be happy to pass it then. — Novice7 (talk) 06:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
- OK, all errors are fixed now! :)Pancake (talk) 14:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
- Happy to pass! :) — Novice7 (talk) 14:57, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
- OK, all errors are fixed now! :)Pancake (talk) 14:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)