Talk:Hands on Me (Jason Derulo song)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: MaranoFan (talk · contribs) 14:45, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:35, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

I will review your article now, as you are due this one! --K. Peake 18:35, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Shouldn't the infobox list the song as being from Nu King?

An experienced editor placed this note regarding this. I am not completely sure if I agree with their reasoning but figured it wasn't worth the conflict.--N Ø 16:13, 31 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"They wrote it with" → "They wrote the song with"
"and its producers," → "and the producers,"
""Hands on Me" describes a romance" → "it describes a romance"
Pipe Music critics to Music journalism
"about the interpolation as well as" → "about the interpolation, as well as"
Wikilink New Zealand Hot Singles per MOS:LINK2SECT
Pipe BGM to Circle Digital Chart
"The music video for it features an appearance by Paris Hilton and depicts" → "The accompanying music video features an appearance by Paris Hilton, and depicts"
"a medley of "Hands on Me" with" → "a medley of the song with"

Background and release

Add a comma after "Savage Love (Laxed – Siren Beat)"
"in a new one" shouldn't this be something like "on a new song"? Also, please invoke the ref at the end of this sentence per this usage of direct quoting.

Composition

Retitle to Composition and lyrics
Wikilink doo-wop on the audio sample text
"Sonically, "Hands on Me" has" → "Musically, "Hands on Me" has" and merge with the above para
Change neighbour to neighbor per American English

Critical reception

Merge with the below section and retitle to Reception and promotion
Wikilink Rolling Stone India to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT
"believed the song "butchered"" → "believed the song "butcher[ed]""
"the age of 9 and" → "the age of nine and" per MOS:NUM

Music video

Make this the second para of the above section
Wikilink music video on the img text
"let's see it"." → "let's see it."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
Change neighbour to neigbor
"it. That's hot"." → "it. That's hot.""

Credits and personnel

Good

Charts

Pipe HRT to Croatian Radiotelevision

Release history

You need to add multiple citations to the reference to back up a various release

References

Fix the date formatting for ref 4
Add different countries citations to ref 9 for the various release
Pipe HRT to Croatian Radiotelevision on ref 11
Cite Circle Chart as publisher instead on ref 13
Wikilink Rolling Stone India on ref 18 per MOS:LINK2SECT

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this was finished today even though I wasn't too sure if I'd make that! --K. Peake 20:12, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Oh wow, the speed. I'll have these addressed within 48 hours. I'm trying to complete this one other article and I will keep getting hella OCD if I do not finish that first, lol.--N Ø 20:52, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This should be good to go, I think, Kyle Peake. Thank you for the review and for the impeccable speed as always.--N Ø 16:13, 31 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

✓ Pass now, thanks right back at you for the tip-top response! --K. Peake 19:23, 31 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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