Talk:Hammock camping/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk · contribs) 02:23, 9 November 2011 (UTC) I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.[reply]

Disambiguations: one found and fixed.[1] Jezhotwells (talk) 02:26, 9 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 02:27, 9 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Checking against GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
The lead fails to summarise the article.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
There are two references, one with an apparently invalid ISBN, the other apparently published by a hammock manufacturer.

Only two paragraphs are referenced. The majority of statements are completely uncited
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
Appears to be a POV article.
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
This is a quick-fail due primarily to lack of referencing, non-neutral point of view. Please read and comprehend the good article criteria before renominating. Jezhotwells (talk) 02:40, 9 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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