Talk:HMS Bonaventure (31)

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copyvio was introduced in the second reversion of the page, on 12:23, 22 December 2005. Everything between then and my edit should be revdelled. Yoenit (talk) 16:15, 3 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Correction: Italian torpedo boat "Vega", not "Vaga". Could you please correct? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.122.12.38 (talk) 20:28, 28 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 02:20, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Initial review

I plan to review this article. I will compile a list of issues. Please fix or argue your case for not fixing. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 02:20, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Review 1

Here are my comments. There will be a Review 2. Djmaschek (talk) 03:40, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Introduction, paragraph 2: "helped to sink and Italian torpedo boat" (and > an, the word "to" seems unnecessary.)
Introduction, paragraph 2, last sentence: (Please give year of sinking.)
Design and description: (Draught 16 ft 10 in (deep load) does not match infobox draught of 14 ft. Can standard load be added to the text?)
Armament, fire control and sensors, and protection: (The Vickers Quad 0.5-inch are not listed in the infobox.)
Armament, fire control and sensors, and protection: (Space needed between Type 128A and ASDIC.)

Review 2

GA class. The ship's career is very well written and no errors were found. I added years to a few dates. Djmaschek (talk) 04:24, 25 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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