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GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:06, 1 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Will do ASAP. JAGUAR  21:06, 1 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

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  • I would recommend removing all red links from the lead, but I'll leave that up to you
    • One of these days, I'll start those articles.
  • The lead summarises the article well, so no issues there
  • "Her conning tower was protected by four inches of armour" - convert to metric
    • Converted in the armament section.
  • "She was still assigned to the 3rd Battle Squadron of the Grand Fleet in Scapa Flow at the start of the war" - World War I
  • "As a scout cruiser, the ship was only lightly protected to maximize her speed" - maximise
    • I think that my subconscious leaves these in so you have something to comment on, sigh.
  • No dead links
  • No dab links
  • Ref 6 needs filling out

Excellent work once again. Once all of the above are done this will pass. JAGUAR  21:13, 1 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for looking this over. BTW, I finally remembered that tonne is the British spelling of what Americans call metric tons, and all those usages have been abbreviations so they never made an appearance.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:52, 1 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for addressing them, and the "tonnes" confusion! Without any further ado, promoted JAGUAR  22:43, 1 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]