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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 14:04, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
- "The the first "
- Sigh.
- "Their complement" -this a formal term I gather?
- Complement and crew are pretty much synonymous.
- "later that month to Portsmouth Dockyard for completion. Upon completion on 5 September 1899," -rep of completion
- Agreed.
- "4 March 1902,[11] and from 11 June that year Andromeda served as flagship to Rear-Admiral Sir Baldwin Wake Walker, commander of the Cruiser Division of the Mediterranean Fleet.[12] In May 1902" -probably don't need to repeat "1902"
- Indeed. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:37, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
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♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:59, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
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