Talk:Guapito

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Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
August 20, 2020	Good article nominee	Listed
October 9, 2020	Good topic candidate	Promoted
February 15, 2024	Good topic removal candidate	Demoted

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Am going to be reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

General

The hyphens in the titles of sub-sections should be replaced by en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH

AAA (2006-2009)

"playing the role of "Mandrox" (sometimes spelled "Madrox")" - a comma is missing from the end of this sentence
"would introduce a new leader since their previous leader" - try another phrase instead to "previous leader" to avoid close repetition of the word "leader"
"had left AAA. AAA introduced Garcia under" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this
"but Guapito returned to AAA shortly afterward" - after
"when Guapito entered the cage to help out." - assist can be written instead for more formality
"hoping to leave the diminutive Guapito in the cage to get his hair shaved off, instead Guapito was able to climb out," - the last part of this text should begin as a new sentence

Independent circuit (2009-2017)

"On September 14, 2013, as part of International Wrestling League's third anniversary show Guapito," - a comma is missing between the words "show" and "Guapito"
"defeat Guapito, Hator, Rossy Moreno, and Scorpio Jr." - defeated

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2017-present)

"with Guapito as the referee for the match." - refereeing the match.
" By the fall of 2017," - try to avoid using seasons per MOS:SEASON
"Guapito, Microman, Atomo, and Zacarias took on Mije, Angelito, Chamuel, and El Gallito. In the end Microman pinned Chamuel to win the tournament" - and El Gallito, which saw Microman pin Chamuel to win the tournament
"Guapito, Zaracias, and Chamuel joined forces once again" - teamed up is more formal

References

I think Reference 2 is missing the ISBN number and publisher?
Wikilink Agence France-Presse

Shall place the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:52, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 I think I addressed them all, thank you for the reviews, I was afraid these would go overlooked for a lot longer. MPJ-DK (talk) 20:39, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. I have made a minor edit to the article. MWright96 (talk) 07:36, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Spanish typos

Hi. I saw the article. It has some typos in Spanish. Garcia -> García Alienigenas -> Alienígenas tecnico -> técnico cibernetico -> cibernético Mascara Sagrada -> Máscara Sagrada Federacion -> Federación Atomo -> Átomo

Also, there is replaceShoker -> replace Shocker. Also, the word Mascota is used a lot, but never explained. Maybe, you should explain to new readers, like you did with Face.--HHH Pedrigree (talk) 11:25, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

HHH Pedrigree thank you for your input, has all been addressed. If you see similar issues in other Lucha articles you can always drop me a line and I'll take a look at then.MPJ-DK (talk) 11:37, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]