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Good articleGuapito has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
August 20, 2020Good article nomineeListed
October 9, 2020Good topic candidatePromoted
February 15, 2024Good topic removal candidateDemoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Am going to be reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

General

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  • The hyphens in the titles of sub-sections should be replaced by en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH

AAA (2006-2009)

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  • "playing the role of "Mandrox" (sometimes spelled "Madrox")" - a comma is missing from the end of this sentence
  • "would introduce a new leader since their previous leader" - try another phrase instead to "previous leader" to avoid close repetition of the word "leader"
  • "had left AAA. AAA introduced Garcia under" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this
  • "but Guapito returned to AAA shortly afterward" - after
  • "when Guapito entered the cage to help out." - assist can be written instead for more formality
  • "hoping to leave the diminutive Guapito in the cage to get his hair shaved off, instead Guapito was able to climb out," - the last part of this text should begin as a new sentence

Independent circuit (2009-2017)

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  • "On September 14, 2013, as part of International Wrestling League's third anniversary show Guapito," - a comma is missing between the words "show" and "Guapito"
  • "defeat Guapito, Hator, Rossy Moreno, and Scorpio Jr." - defeated

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2017-present)

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  • "with Guapito as the referee for the match." - refereeing the match.
  • " By the fall of 2017," - try to avoid using seasons per MOS:SEASON
  • "Guapito, Microman, Atomo, and Zacarias took on Mije, Angelito, Chamuel, and El Gallito. In the end Microman pinned Chamuel to win the tournament" - and El Gallito, which saw Microman pin Chamuel to win the tournament
  • "Guapito, Zaracias, and Chamuel joined forces once again" - teamed up is more formal

References

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  • I think Reference 2 is missing the ISBN number and publisher?
  • Wikilink Agence France-Presse

Shall place the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:52, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Spanish typos

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Hi. I saw the article. It has some typos in Spanish. Garcia -> García Alienigenas -> Alienígenas tecnico -> técnico cibernetico -> cibernético Mascara Sagrada -> Máscara Sagrada Federacion -> Federación Atomo -> Átomo

Also, there is replaceShoker -> replace Shocker. Also, the word Mascota is used a lot, but never explained. Maybe, you should explain to new readers, like you did with Face.--HHH Pedrigree (talk) 11:25, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]