Talk:Greenwood railway station/GA1

GA Review

Passed. 750h+ | Talk 05:48, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Steelkamp (talk · contribs) 03:47, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 04:26, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Steelkamp: I'll take this since I've lived in Perth ever since! 750h+ | Talk 04:26, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Nice! That's the quickest I've ever received a review. Steelkamp (talk) 04:28, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Haha, I'll begin reviewing this shortly. 750h+ | Talk 04:30, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

After several promises by the state government during the 1990s to build the station, a A$6.8 million... It should be "an A$6.8", not "a A$6.8"
- It should be "a A$6.8 million", because it is read out loud as "a six point eight million Australian dollar...
...million contract was awarded to John... Is "awarded" the right word? Wouldn't "granted" sound better?
- Awarded is a common term used in contracting, and the sources use that term. See Contract awarding also.
May just be personal preference, but wouldn't "five-minute frequency" and "fifteen-minute frequency" look better than "five minute frequency" and "fifteen minute frequency"
- I agree. I always forget which one is correct, so I had to check a previous GA review. Steelkamp (talk) 05:39, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In the infobox, "Public Transport Authority" shouldn't be linked twice.
- Removed one.

Those are my lead concerns, @Steelkamp: 750h+ | Talk 04:38, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Description

It consists of a series of bicycles which were... "Which" should be changed to "that".
- Done.

No other problems. 750h+ | Talk 05:10, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

History

...was extended north at a cost of $1.8 million... change "at a cost of" to "for" for conciseness.
- Done.
Prior to the shelter extension... Change "Prior to" to "Before" for conciseness.
- Done.
I don't think "shelted" is a real word. Maybe you meant "sheltered"?
- Done.
Change "percent" to "per cent" (Australian English).
- I believe either spelling is correct.

Nothing else from me. 750h+ | Talk 05:15, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Services

for a five minute frequency in total change five minute to five-minute, as said above.
- Done.
From it's opening change "it's" to "its".
- Done.

Image check

Images are fine, all have alt text and are appropriately licensed. Image review passed. 750h+ | Talk 05:19, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Source check

To start soon.

2 OK, shows the map.
6 and 7 OK.
13 OK.
18 OK, couldn't check 17.
23 and 24 OK.
33 OK
39 OK
Just asking, @Steelkamp:, in the Services section's first paragraph, why isn't there a reference? 750h+ | Talk 05:24, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- There weren't any references there because I forgot to add them, lol. That should be everything addressed now. Thanks, Steelkamp (talk) 05:39, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Verdict

With all my concerns addressed, I am now happy to pass this article for Good Article status. Well done! 750h+ | Talk 05:47, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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