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May 26, 2015	Good article nominee	Listed

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on November 20, 2014.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the 2012 satirical comedy drama OMG – Oh My God! was the first film produced by Grazing Goat Pictures Pvt. Ltd?

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:50, 25 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I should have this to you by tomorrow JAGUAR 18:50, 25 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

"Its first film OMG – Oh My God!, was banned in UAE and Malaysia" - I would write out United Arab Emirates fully here
"In India a few screenings of the film had to be cancelled and a police case was lodged against the filmmakers and actors for hurting religious sentiments" - might read better as A few screenings of the film had to be cancelled in India and a police case lodged against the filmmakers and actors for harming religious sentiments
The lead meets WP:LEAD and the GA criteria, though I would mention a little more on the production house's history in order to fully summarise
"The film received poor initial collection at the box office[15] but because of word of mouth it picked up and proved to be a commercial success" - this claim of success due to word of mouth is unreferenced, though I stand wrong if it's in one of the other citations. Also it might be better to replace "because" with "due to"

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Close - promoted

I couldn't find anything major enough to constitute putting this on hold - so I'll promote this now. It is overall well written, well referenced and the article is broad, thus meeting the GA criteria. Well done! JAGUAR 11:07, 26 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]