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Reviewer: Tbhotch (talk · contribs) 16:56, 23 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality (prose is clear and concise, without exceeding quotations, or spelling and grammar errors):
    B. MoS compliance (included, but not limited to: lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists):
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources (it also includes an appropriate reference section):
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary (including direct quotations):
    C. No original research:
    D. No copyright violations:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    edit wars, multiple edits not related to the GAN process, etc. (this excludes blatant vandalism):
  6. Does it contain images (or other media) to illustrate (or support) the topic?
    A. Images (and other media) are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images (and other media) are provided where possible and are relevant, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
Resolved comments from Tbhotch
;Image
  • It is too small. Can you re-upload it as 200-300px?
  • "The cover art can be obtained from Warner Music Latina." -> It needs a source
Infobox
  • It says "1:58:59", but the length given (I assume it is the deluxe edition, which should be noted) does not add that
Lead
  • two new songs: "Misterios del Amor" and "Si Te Perdiera". Both songs were released as singles from the album. -> Merge both sentences
  • "and features six extra songs as well as a DVD" -> "and features six extra songs, as well as a DVD"
  • "AllMusic critic Thom Jurek who commended" -> "AllMusic critic Thom Jurek, who commended"
  • multi-platinum in Mexico and the United States (Latin) and platinum -> Multi-Platinum in Mexico and the United States (Latin) and Platinum
Background
  • "while "Si Te Perdiera" was written by Manuel Alejandro" -> Source says "Si te Perdiera, de Asensi."
  • "both songs were produced by Miguel." -> Source says Misterios was produced by him, not both
  • "Misterios del Amor" and "Si Te Perdiera". "Misterios de Amor" -> typo
    • I suggest you to use synonyms for the titles as you repeat them too much
Reception
  • "the disc" -> It is a double-disc
  • "was certified platinum by CAPIF" -> I couldn't find it at the source given
  • Source 16: Instructions are in English, but the page is in Spanish. You have to be clearer when guiding readers.
  • Aren't there more reviews? For example Santa Claus Lane failed thrice for not having an appropiate Critical reception section[1], now it does but the main author left the article.
Track listing
  • Why the Deluxe edition comes first?
  • Deluxe disc 1 total length adds 63:48
  • Deluxe disc 1 total length adds 55:09
  • Standard ed. and DVD are lacking a sourced length
  • "Cuando Calienta El Sol" -> "Cuando Calienta el Sol"
  • América & En Vivo -> I know it is titled like that but prepositions are not captalized per MOS:CT
  • "Tengo Todo Excepto a Tí" -> Typo
Credits
References

Article on hold. © Tbhotch™ (en-2.5). 00:29, 26 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Tbhotch: Thanks for reviewing the article Tbhotch. I believed I have addressed most of the issues you brought up. I cannot edit the instructions for PROMUSICAE as it is part of the template. I searched for the Argentine certs, but couldn't find them so I removed them for the time being. As for reviewers, I already requested at resource request to look for offline sources for reviews, but I was unsuccessful in doing so. I searched online in both English and Spanish. I have written several GA articles where I could only find a review from the AllMusic. It is rather unfortunate. I've uploaded a larger image of the album cover and will let the bot take care of the size reduction. Erick (talk) 14:23, 28 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
OK then, I have no other concern, therefore I approve its nomination. Good work. © Tbhotch™ (en-2.5). 22:27, 28 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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