Talk:Graham Kernwein

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Review: October 28, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 12:20, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:58, 26 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:46, 26 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead needs expanded.
"Early life and college"
Where was Wenona High? Add it to the article. Also, the high school in the infobox should be formatted the new way I guess.
Move full name to body with ref.
Add college years to infobox.
Addes cats: Chicago Maroons men's track and field athletes, Track and field athletes from Illinois, Pritzker School of Medicine alumni, American orthopedic surgeons, 20th-century surgeons, United States Army personnel of World War II, United States Army Medical Corps officers
"He was "used considerably" by coach Amos Alonzo Stagg" put head coach?
I think John Thomas in that quote is John Webster Thomas.
"his specialty being the 220 meters" link?
Nice pictures. They really liven up the article.
Link fumble in that quote.
"Kernwein with Racine." Remove period in caption.
"According to coach Amos Alonzo Stagg" just put coach Stagg.
Do you know if he was with the Bears during the regular season? Let's go ahead and add the asterisk to the infobox.
I guess he didn't marry Dorothy?
Is there a link for orthopedic surgeon?
Link Army Medical Corps to United States Army Medical Corps.
"American Medical Association" link
"American Board of Surgery" link
"American Board of Orthopedic Surgery" link
Any details on how he died?

Amazing research. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 03:51, 26 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: Updated the article – think I addressed everything. I also reorganized the one blockquote, which seemed a bit long. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:32, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- I did a spot check of the sources and didn't find any more issues. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:51, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.