Talk:Government of Kerala/GA1
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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 09:28, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
Nominator: Shaji issac (talk · contribs)
@Shaji issac – I would be reviewing this article per GA criteria. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:28, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
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- Comments
- Various thing in lead like "vote of no confidence", "snap election", etc. isn't in the prose. The lead should only be summary of the entire article.
- Various other grammatical and MOS errors. Suggesting to submit the article for copy editing here WP:GOCE/REQ.
- The two main article in the "Kerala Council of Ministers" subsections need to be merged in a single template.
"It consists of the governor, the chief minister and the Council of Ministers."
– Not sure why Council and Ministers are capitalized."Like in other Indian states ........ for the Governor's approval."
– Entire paragraph is uncited, when various statements like "The executive authority is headed by the Chief ...", "The present Chief Minister is Pinarayi Vijayan...", etc. require citation.- The only citation in "The governor is appointed ..... exercise or their own opinion." paragraph doesn't cites the whole text.
- The current governor and powers of governor needs citation.
- The only citation in "Legislative branch" section doesn't cite the whole text.
- "152 CD blocks" – what is CD?
- The list of departments need citation(s)
- "State insignias" section – I doubt whether this is related to "Government of Kerala" or not. And again, it needs various other sources.
"When the kingdoms of Cochin..."
→ "When the Kingdom of Cochin..."- "Elections" sections is again entirely unsourced.
- The "Politics" section is also unsourced, when various statements like
"The political alliance has strongly stabilised and, with rare exceptions, most of the coalition partners maintain loyalty to the alliance ...."
"In terms of individual parties, the state has strong leanings towards socialism and thus Communist parties have made strong inroads in Kerala. ...."
"The Bharatiya Janata Party (the Party that currently leads the Government of India) is also active in Kerala, but is not part ...."
"The CPI(M) led LDF did a clean sweep of 11–0 over UDF and NDA in ...."
"Other popular regional parties are: (entire list) ...."
- "Awards and Honours" section – I doubt whether this is related to "Government of Kerala" or not.
- I suggest adding Alt text to every image
- Although not necessary, please consider some expert studies on this topic.
- Final assessment
- I am currently failing this nomination, majorly due to lack of citations. Feel free to re-nominate after addressing all the issues. Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:15, 5 August 2021 (UTC)