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Reviewer: TbhotchTalk C. 05:48, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
  • Lead
It was recorded in April of 1998 -> WP:MONTHS
  • Done - Fixed
  • Background and release
revolved around the mixed blessings of fame. -> Sounds like a copy-paste.
  • Done - quoted and published author
Stephen Thomas Erlewine need a wikilink elsewhere in the article
  • Done - linked
The single also apprehends B-sides -> they could go on the infobox too.
  • It is, but won't show up
  • Music video
the video album that -> maybe the video album where?
  • Done - reworded
  • Reception
Allmusic -> Not need to be in italics.
  • Done - removed italics
Erlewine's comment is in two sections.
  • Done - removed comment
on MTV's Total Request Live -> In the previous section it says "Executives from TRL said", so this must be inverted.
  • Done - changed both to MTV's Total Request Live
and on January 12, 1999, the music video was officially declared the first video that retired from MTV -> Repeated too.
  • Done - removed
Also, January 12, 2009, had not been mentioned.
  • Done - added to section
On ref 22 TRL (or MTV Networks) publish the archive.
  • Done
  • Composition
song on Follow the Leader -> overlinked
  • Done - unlinked
on Follow the Leader. Like Follow the Leader -> synonyms needed
  • Done
  • Chart performance
Alfabethic order only.
  • Done
Australian ref is failing (but I checked it at Ultratop so there's no problem for now. If it is persistent change it.)
  • I don't see how this fails (archived just in case)
References 29 and 30 need accessdate and if its possible publisher
  • Done
  • References and notes
Both are inverted (In this article the references should be the notes and vice versa).
  • Done - Changed to "Literature" and "Cited"
  • General

1 dab link

  • Done' - repaired dab

I've checked it, on hold until July 18, 2010 (UTC). TbhotchTalk C. 05:48, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]