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although he said West and his group 'were really cool' - You can cut this since his opinion on the group already comes across with the text before it.
whom he described as 'amazing artists' - I would cut the last quote since it isn't too relevant to this specific song. I try to watch using this kind of text too much since it can sound POV.
attributing this to West's great ear for talent in the variety of musicians and artists - I would the last quote here, too. I think the important point is delivered with the first part alone
I would add "(pictured)" after James Cleveland on the image caption
"Black-and-white" has a typo in the alt text
while also praising the cinematics - I would change this to "cinematic elements" since it might be sligthly unclear
Aidy James Stevens felt moved by the song from his position of atheism - I think changing to "despite his position of atheism" would better reflect what Stevens is trying to say
This was a short review; the article is very good! I'm a fan of the composition and lyrics, its very concise which tends to be a fun bonus of smaller non-single songs like this. All issues should be relatively easy to fix. IanTEB (talk) 17:50, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
IanTEB Thank you for this review, all has been completed now and I kept vocalist for consistency with the articles since this is a gospel album, not his traditional rap genre. --K. Peake08:08, 17 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]