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Giovanna Battaglia is not principally a social media personality, she is first and foremost a Fashion Editor, Stylist and Creative Director. This is what she is credited as on models.com: ^[1]

She is a senior fashion editor and stylist for Vogue Japan: ^[2] ^[3] ^[4]

Also a fashion editor and stylist for luxury brands including: Ermano Scervino ^[5] Carolina Herrera ^[6] Max Mara ^[7] Michael Kors ^[8] Moncler ^[9]

The article should list that she is a Contributing Fashion Editor to W magazine, not generally that she moved to New York to work for W. Validation from W here: ^[10] ^[11]

Additional validating sources to her status as Fashion Editor, Stylist and Creative Director as below: ^[12] ^[13] ^[14] ^[15] ^[16] ^[17] ^[18] ^[19] ^[20] ^[21]

In 2016 she directed a short film for Tory Burch's holiday campaign: ^[22] ^[23] ^[24]

Giovanna was the creative director of the Diamond Horseshoe nightclub from 2013-2016 - a disruptive, interactive theatrical experience. ^[25] ^[26] ^[27] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Charlotte Jade (talk • contribs)

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^ The subject's description as a social media personality was removed.

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^ These claims must also come from the individual companies themselves.

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^ The subject is notable for being a magazine fashion editor. They are not notable for being a small film director.

[1] ttps://models.com/people/giovanna-battaglia

[2] ttps://models.com/work/vogue-japan-do-the-harlem-shuffle

[3] ttps://models.com/work/vogue-japan-a-nouveau-sophistication

[4] ttps://models.com/work/vogue-japan-vogue-japan-june-2017-cover

[5] ttps://models.com/work/ermanno-scervino-ermanno-scervino-ss-2017

[6] ttps://models.com/work/carolina-herrera-carolina-herrera-ss-17-show

[7] ttps://models.com/work/max-mara-max-mara-studio-campaign-spring-2016

[8] ttps://models.com/work/michael-kors-michael-kors-endless-sundays-spring-2016-1

[9] ttps://models.com/work/moncler-moncler-gamme-rouge-ss-16-show

[10] ttps://www.wmagazine.com/story/giovanna-battaglia-engelbert-book-giography-rizzoli

[11] ttps://www.wmagazine.com/story/w-masthead

[12] ttps://www.theguardian.com/fashion/2017/dec/28/fast-forward-the-five-people-who-will-influence-how-we-dress-in-2018

[13] ttps://www.architecturaldigest.com/story/fashion-editor-giovanna-battaglia-stockholm-apartment

[14] ttps://ig.ft.com/all-star-gifting-2017/

[15] ttps://www.ft.com/content/5cc5d96e-7910-11e7-90c0-90a9d1bc9691

[16] ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OEgA4s01Eao

[17] ttp://noorfares.com/giovanna-battaglia/

[18] ttps://www.telegraph.co.uk/fashion/people/meet-giovanna-battaglia-engelbert-woman-leading-fantasy-fashion/

[19] ttps://www.vogue.in/content/giovanna-battaglia-engelbert-on-going-to-the-bathroom-in-a-ballgown/

[20] ttps://www.image.ie/life/the-best-instagrams-from-vogue-japan-editor-giovanna-battaglias-isle-of-capri-wedding-60391

[21] ttps://fashionista.com/2017/10/giovanna-battaglia-engelbert-street-style

[22] ttp://www.fashionone.com/news/2016/12/24/tory-burch-debuts-short-film-directed-by-giovanna-battaglia-engelbert/

[23] ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2JvV83C6dbs

[24] ttp://www.toryburch.co.uk/blog-post/blog-post.html?bpid=246991

[25] ttps://www.nowness.com/story/queen-of-the-night-giovanna-battaglia

[26] ttp://observer.com/2014/04/giovanna-battaglia-talks-queen-of-the-night/

[27] ttps://www.nytimes.com/2014/02/03/theater/twisting-touching-and-teasing-in-queen-of-the-night.html

[28] The subject's description as a social media personality was removed.

[29] Information regarding the subject's employment through Vogue Japan needs to come from Vogue Japan itself, as they are in the best position to claim themselves as employer of the subject.

[30] These claims must also come from the individual companies themselves.

[31] The information regarding W magazine already appears in the article.

[32] Regarding these claims as to the "status" of the subject, your particular request does not delineate with any certainty what changes you'd like to be made. COI edit requests must include complete and specific descriptions of the request, that is, specify what text should be removed and a verbatim copy of the text that should replace it. "Please change X" is not acceptable and will be rejected; the request must be of the form "Please change X to Y".

[33] The subject is notable for being a magazine fashion editor. They are not notable for being a small film director.

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