Talk:Giorgio Vanni
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Fixes of some stuff
[edit]So, this is apparently the first Wikipedia article I think I've encountered where it had the most mistakes. No hate to whoever edited the article.
it frankly took some time, but at least I tried to remove the following:
- Frequent use of present tense (past tense for history, methinks)
- Frequent use of "the artist", and instead reducing it (it doesn't need to appear that often in my opinion.)
- Lack of italics (properties needed italics, such as anime and cartoon titles)
And other miscellaneous mistakes:
- Sentences that didn't sound neutral, and moreso sounded like the editor's opinion (it's fine for a blog, I just felt as if it didn't need to be in the article. Sorry for that sacrifice.)
- Redundant description in "Discography"
- Adding templates for unsourced (sometimes reworded) claims
I think that's all I could keep track of. Either way, again, I don't intend on hate, it's just something I noticed. WannurSyafiqah74 (talk) 08:39, 10 July 2023 (UTC)