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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 12:39, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. I will start the review soon. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 12:39, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Comments

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General

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  • Image caption can be shortened to just "Ibrahim in 2011".
    •  Done
  • Add birth location in the infobox → Long Beach, California, U.S.
    •  Done
  • Implement a horizontal list in the infobox → {{hlist|Citizen journalist|activist}}
    • Huh, I've never used that template! Neat.  Done
  • Are there sources that call her "Gihan Ibrahim"?
    • Almost all call her Gigi, but yes – see for example LA Times (currently in article) and Al-Ahram (not used in article, but mentions Ibrahim)
  • Revolutionary socialist seems to not be that important to be mentioned in the first sentence. It can be moved somewhere elsewhere in the lede.
    •  Done – fits well in second sentence, so I moved it there.
  • Only 21k bytes–the lede will have to get rewritten. Twitter is linked twice, "her political views were rarely mentioned" mentioned twice.
    • Trimmed the lede a bit, and fixed those specific issues. How much more is needed?
  • Add her birth date in the "Early life" section.
    •  Done, although the degree of precision based on the sources isn't great.

Images

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  • All alright, would prefer the addition of alt texts.
    • Alt texts added, though they might not be great.

Sources

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  • Move the Ourdan 2011 source to "Early life" section.
    •  Done
  • "Some find Time Magazine cover controversial" has a dead URL.
    • I just noticed that too, and I can't seem to find an archive. I've removed that source – luckily another source supports the same content. I've tried to run IAbot to prevent future issues with other sources, but AbuseFilter seems to be blocking it.
  • Unlink Quehacer and Centro de Estudios y Promocion del Desarrollo.
    •  Done
  • Rest of the sources are alright.

@Ezlev: On hold until these issues get fixed. --Vacant0 (talk) 18:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Issues addressed, Vacant0! Thanks for reviewing this! ezlev (user/tlk/ctrbs) 19:16, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Promoting. Good job. Vacant0 (talk) 19:47, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]