Talk:Ghosttown (Madonna song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 20:55, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi. I'm Calvin999 and I am reviewing this nomination. — Calvin999 20:58, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
- One dead link
- on March 13, 2015 as → Comma after 2015
- released onto → release on
- as well as compared it → as well as comparing it
- In the Background and release section, the picture is making the block quote look like a normal paragraph. Try using the coding on the block quote of "Man Down" so that it forces the block quote to still be indented from the image.
- single, "Talk Dirty", → I don't think you need a comma after single?
- "Ghosttown"'s → "Ghosttown{{"'}}s (So that the punctuation doesn't blur)
- chorus comes it around → typo
- According to Musicnotes.com, → I don't think you need this
- who transformed the → Reads slightly fan-like
- According to Idolator, → Should be linked here and unlinked in Critical reception
- In France the → Comm after France
- In Italy "Ghosttown" → Comma after Italy
- on the tally, → you don't have entries on a tally, you tally on a chart.
- from her → since her
- She pulled ahead of runners-ups → She's always been ahead of them, so 'further ahead' perhaps?
- who have 22 number-one songs each. → Rihanna has 23 now, so this needs to be changed to something along the lines of "at the time"
- Along with the Dance Club Songs record, "Ghosttown" debuted at number 38 on the Adult Pop Songs chart, becoming the singer's 19th entry on the list. → Is 19 entries also a record?
- Ref 2: Billboard needs linking
- Ref 12: Link Slant Magazine, and unlink 40 and 94
- Ref 24: Link Idolator
- Some sources are in a foreign language? Like 38? Still need a language parameter to inform which language it's in.
- 12, 62 and 92 have double quotation marks in their title because you need to use ' instead of " in the formatting.
- Outcome
On hold for 7 days. — Calvin999 15:34, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
- Done Calvin999 and many thanks. —Indian:BIO [ ChitChat ] 10:30, 28 August 2015 (UTC)
- Passing. — Calvin999 10:39, 28 August 2015 (UTC)