Talk:Get Sexy/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: 1111tomica (talk · contribs) I will review the article:) 20:17, 17 January 2012 (UTC)

No dead links or disambiguation pages. That's good ! — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22

10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

Lead

• "Get Sexy" is a song by English girl group Sugababes, taken from the group's seventh studio album, ---> "Get Sexy" is a song by English girl group Sugababes, taken from their seventh studio album... (because there is repeating of the word group in the sentence)— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

• It was written by Phillip Lawrence, Ari Levine, Bruno Mars, Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass and Rob ManzoliIt and produced by The Smeezingtons. ---> It was written by Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass, Rob Manzolilt, Phillip Lawrence, Ari Levine, Bruno Mars and produced by the latter three under their stage name The Smeezingtons.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

• The song was released on 31 August 2009 ---> The song was released on August 31, 2009.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

 Not done. Britain uses dd/mm/yy format. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

• Emil Nava and features the group's members in a house of mirrors, a bird cage and on a couch ... on a couch? I mean I don't find it necessary here. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

Background and composition (merge the both sections since the composition one is too small to standing like that)

•  Not done.

• I have expanded the composition section, hopefully it is long enough now. Till I Go Home (talk) 01:04, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

• Its okay. We can treat them like separate sections. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)

• In late-April ... remove the hyphen — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

• "Get Sexy", which was selected as the album's lead single, was written by The Smeezingtons, Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass and Rob Manzoli.[3] It was produced by The Smeezingtons ... use the sentence from the lead.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

• No 6 July, 2009... July 6, 2009— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

 Not done. Britain uses dd//mm//yy. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:23, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

• again August 31, 2009— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

 Not done. Britain uses dd//mm//yy. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:23, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

• The song has been described as a "slamming dance anthem" ... Who described it? — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

Composition

• Musicnotes.com is published by Sony/ATV Music Publishing. Change it in the text and the reference.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
• Maybe you can also reduce the repeating of the song in the section.— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception

• unlink Boom Boom Pow per Wikipedia:OVERLINK— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
• David Balls of Digital Spy awarded ---> David Balls of Digital Spy gave— Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)

Commercial performance

• Looks good

Music video

• Some other primary information about the video? Which other music videos did Emil Nava direct? He has collaborate with the Babes before? Where was shot? Something? — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
• The video screenshot fails WP:NFCC#8. Remove it. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)

References

Mmm they are pretty bad condition. Here are the tasks: — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)

• 1. publisher=Hachette Filipacchi Médias
• 2. The same as 1
• 4. Same as 1 and 2
• 5. Same as 1, 2 and 4
• 6. Same us 1, 2, 4 and 5
• 7 Un-italicize iTunes. publisher= Apple
• 8 Un-italicize Discogs
• 9. work=Daily Mail|publisher=Associated Newspapers Ltd
• 10. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5 and 6
• 11. You have the task in the composition review
• 12. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5, 6 and 10
• 13. work=Guardian|publisher=Guardian Media Group
• 14. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 10 and 12
• 15. Un-italicize Popjustice
• 18. Same as the previous
• 19. publisher=UK Singles Chart. The Official Charts Company
• 20. Same as 19
• 21. Same as 19 and 20
• 22. publisher= MTV UK. Viacom
• 28. Same as 9
• 29. Same as before
• 30. Link Capital FM
• 31. Un-italicize Sugababes.de
• 33. Needs accessdate
• 34-43. All need accessdate

Will post more comments tomorrow. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 00:31, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

All in all

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• I addressed all the issues above except the music video screenshot, where I changed the caption. Is it relevant now? Till I Go Home (talk) 01:38, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

  Why is Digital Spy in the name of the reference. Both Digital Spy and Hachette Filipachi Media should be in the publisher. For the image is good now. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 08:54, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

  Because that's the title of the page. Till I Go Home 08:56, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

  Nevermind. You remove it from there and adding it in the publisher. After you finish formatting the references well. I will pass the article. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 08:57, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

  So will it be "|publisher=Digital Spy. Hachette Filipachi Media" ? Till I Go Home (talk) 08:59, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

  Yes.:) The same with the others. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 09:01, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

  I put in Digital spy in the publisher now. :) Till I Go Home (talk) 09:05, 23 January 2012 (UTC)