Talk:German submarine U-38 (1938)/GA1
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A few comments:
- The lede should be entirely unreferenced or entirely referenced.
- I've added in more citations.--White Shadows you're breaking up 21:08, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
- Are better pictures available; pictures without the black film at the bottom? If not, that's fine, considering the discussion here on a similar issue.
- I'm afraid that this is the same situation as the other article. Sorry :(--White Shadows you're breaking up 20:57, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
- Size of the AA guns?
- Done, (2 cm FlaK 30).--White Shadows you're breaking up 21:00, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
- Given that other articles have listed the coordinates of the sunken ships, are those possible to have on this article? It would be useful to have them.
- Not only would that take 20+ hours to do in one sitting but I don't know how to. Perhaps I can get Dawkeye to asist me on that but if not, I'll have to make some sort of attempt at it. This may take several days though, if it does get done.--White Shadows you're breaking up 23:26, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
- I think it would be best to get it done. The work can be spread out over a few days; it doesn't need to be done in one sitting. I can't imagine why it would be that hard though, and I'd be curious to learn. Leo 00:45, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
- Ok then. I'll give it a shot.--White Shadows you're breaking up 22:37, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
- Done. That should be the last issue.--White Shadows you're breaking up 19:26, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
- Alright. Leo 02:01, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
- Done. That should be the last issue.--White Shadows you're breaking up 19:26, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
- Ok then. I'll give it a shot.--White Shadows you're breaking up 22:37, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
- I think it would be best to get it done. The work can be spread out over a few days; it doesn't need to be done in one sitting. I can't imagine why it would be that hard though, and I'd be curious to learn. Leo 00:45, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
- Some more variety in source materials would be appreciated.
- Working on it.--White Shadows you're breaking up 23:26, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
- IMHO, 5-6 seperate sources is "good". If your standerds are higher, just let me know and I'll get more.--White Shadows you're breaking up 23:37, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
- That's fine, thanks. Leo 00:45, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
- A notification that the final external links is in German would be nice.
- IMHO, 5-6 seperate sources is "good". If your standerds are higher, just let me know and I'll get more.--White Shadows you're breaking up 23:37, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
- Done.--White Shadows you're breaking up 22:57, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
Not much else I see. Good article.
Reviewer: Leo 00:07, 13 April 2010 (UTC)