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Reviewer: MisterBee1966 (talk · contribs) 12:22, 3 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
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  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
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    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
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  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
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  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
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  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
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  7. Overall:
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I will base my review on Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz volume 6 pages 55 to 57. MisterBee1966 (talk) 12:22, 3 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hildebrand, Hans H.; Röhr, Albert; Steinmetz, Hans-Otto (1993). Die Deutschen Kriegsschiffe. Vol. 1–10. Ratingen: Mundus Verlag. ASIN B003VHSRKE.

  • First commander was KK Martin Baltzer, later Viceadmiral and chief of the Marine Personalamt (chief of the naval personnel office). Teddy Suhren would later have his discepancies with Baltzer
    • Added.
  • 308 sailors lost their lives
    • Added.
  • the new bow increased length from 119m to 119.3m
    • Added.
  • the 6 x 2cm guns were augmented by further 2 x 2cm guns, at the time of her sinking she had 8 x 2cm guns
  • I recommend to use the full name of Kampfgeschwader 26, not the abbreviated KG 26 version
    • Done.
  • "Fleet review" links to "Fleet review (Commonwealth realms)"; Is this appropriate here?