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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 18:32, 5 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'll return the favor. Parsecboy (talk) 18:32, 5 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • The service history section is a bit "wall of text"-y. Can you break up those long paragraphs? I'd recommend splitting after the Battle of North Cape, merging that with the first few lines in the next para (splitting that after Z38 withdraws after taking hits), then split again when Z38 escorted Schlesien to Swinemünde (and merge that with the first two lines of the last paragraph).
  •  Done
  • There are several duplicate links that need to be removed
  •  Done
  • "1939; laid down by" - you need a "was" here and for "launched" as well
  •  Done
  • "retrieval boat, for the" - no comma there
  •  Done
  • What kind of ship is Lützow? Ditto for Deutschland, Prinz Eugen, etc.
  •  Done
  • Per MOS:SURNAME, "Admiral Bey" should drop the rank
  •  Done
  • The general consensus is to treat Scharnhorst as a battleship on Wikipedia
  •  Done
  • "German destroyers Z29..." "German" is redundant here

 Done