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Reviewer: LavaBaron (talk · contribs) 01:04, 5 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]


1. Reasonably well-written?

  • I don't believe "student-pastor" is hyphenated but am open to correction if wrong. ... double-checked and stand corrected
  • "a" before "American" should be "an"
  • In the second sentence of "pastoral career" the period should be inside the quotation marks since the rest of the article is composed using American grammar.
  • The first sentence of the third paragraph of "pastoral career" places a comma outside the quotation marks, instead of inside.
  • Assorted other instances of punctuation placed outside quotation marks throughout the article.
  • In the paragraph about cattle drives it's self-evident who "these men" are but it should be more specific. Suggest replacing "these men" with "cowboys."

2. Factually accurate?

  • The lede says he was one of the "most significant," however, the supporting source says he was one of the "best known." I think these two terms are different enough that the source doesn't support the statement.

3. Broad in coverage?

  • did a cursory search for stories of salaciousness or corruption and he came-back clean

4. NPOV?
5. Stable?
6. Images?

  • I have to believe there are more PD images of Hewitt than this single headshot. Maybe even the Truett seminary building? Alternatively or concurrently, I've uploaded an audio sample of a sermon here. Please add it somewhere. Feel free to change the caption however you like.
File:Voice of George Washington Truett 1941.ogg
Excerpt from a studio-recorded sermon delivered by George Washington Truett in 1941.
Passed with modifications addressed by nominator. LavaBaron (talk) 20:02, 27 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]