Talk:Gary Miranda

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--Thelema12 (talk) 15:49, 15 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, You requested comments at the Poetry Project page, so I thought I'd swing by and have a neb. The article looks fine to me. I don't know Miranda's work. I'm sure you are in the middle of collectinng ideas and are covering these things, but I'd flag these points

It's not clear in the article yet why Miranda would be notable enough to have a page. There are a million poets out there who have contributed to the same magazines. Have a neb at the Wikipedia:Notability (people) page.
I'd amend the headings to 'Poetry collections' and 'Prose collections' so that editors don't add individual essays, articles or poems to the list.
Perhaps to get a crit section in early, as they are the hardest to write - themes, reception, development as a writer etc. It might encourage other editors to add if you start one.
Mention what kind of poet he is - what school he is inspired by, who he was mentored by, is he mostly lyrical, post-modernist, nature based etc.

I hope that helps. Best wishes Span (talk) 01:26, 17 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Good work Thelma. Best wishes Span (talk) 09:50, 27 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]