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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 23:46, 19 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
    B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
    Some issues; see below
    C. It contains no original research:
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
Issues
  • Duplicate links: African Distinguished Conduct Medal, Mentioned in Dispatches
  • The abbreviation RWAFF appears without being defined (although we can guess it). It begs a question though: when did the WAFF become Royal?
  • "the Gambia Regiment were put in brigade reserve" -> "the Gambia Regiment was put in brigade reserve"
  • "Pi Chaun" -> " Pi Chaung"
  • "12 miles" Use the {{convert}} template to convert to km
Placing article on hold. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 23:46, 19 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Hawkeye7: Thank you for promptly taking a look at the article! I've made all the adjustments you have suggested. I have removed duplicate links, explained (in the interwar section) when the RWAFF gained royal patronage, changed the grammatical errors, put in the convert template (which I didn't even know existed, I'll use this more regularly now), linked Prince Philip, and most importantly, cited the COs and battle honours sections. I have also placed an 'incomplete list' template on the COs section, owing to the fact that it *is* incomplete. If there's anything else, let me know. Jeffrolland (talk) 10:03, 20 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
All good then. Great to see a subject like this being tackled. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 11:26, 20 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]