Talk:G.I. Joe: Retaliation/GA1
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Reviewer: Rusted AutoParts 14:36, 22 September 2013 (UTC)
I will review this. Rusted AutoParts 14:36, 22 September 2013 (UTC)
- The lead section should have a bit more detail in it. Cast, production highlights, expanded detail on critical reception.
- I reorganized the intro, but I'm not sure what specifically needs to be added. Fortdj33 (talk) 21:39, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
- A bit of info from each section. Mention the new cast joining as well as returning cast in a way that doesn't sound like its just listing off. See Star Trek Into Darkness lead section as an example. Rusted AutoParts 21:50, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
- I expanded the cast and plot information in the lede, per your example. Fortdj33 (talk) 22:52, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
- A bit of info from each section. Mention the new cast joining as well as returning cast in a way that doesn't sound like its just listing off. See Star Trek Into Darkness lead section as an example. Rusted AutoParts 21:50, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
- I reorganized the intro, but I'm not sure what specifically needs to be added. Fortdj33 (talk) 21:39, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
- A majority of the production section could be merged. A lot of sections with very little detail.
- Perhaps remove the picture of The Rock from the cast section. Or keep his and remove the cast picture. The sizes aren't compatible.
Done. I removed The Rock, and move the cast picture to the Casting section, as to not break up the Cast list.
- Needs a few more pictures.
- Added a picture from the toyline in the Promotion section. Fortdj33 (talk) 23:21, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
Pass keep it ship shape, and don't forget to keep improving it. Rusted AutoParts 00:47, 29 September 2013 (UTC)