Talk:French destroyer Lansquenet (1939)/GA1
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 22:38, 23 September 2019 (UTC)
A few nitpicks:
- Lead
- suggest "in November she helped to escort back to France one of the battleships damaged by the British during their July attack on Mers-el-Kébir in French Algeria."
- suggest "Placed in reserve, after the Allies landed in French North Africa in November 1942 she was scuttled to prevent her capture when the Germans occupied Vichy France."
- suggest "she was refloated in 1946, but was never repaired. She was stricken then scrapped in 1958."
- Body
- "two twin Hotchkiss Mitrailleuse de 13.2 mm (0.52 in) CA Modèle 1929 machine guns"
- link Toulon
- suggest "The Germans attempted to capture the French ships in Toulon intact on 27 November 1942 during the occupation of Vichy France. Lansquenet was in..."
- no details on her use by the Germans?
- She was never repaired enough to be used by anybody
- are the sources clear about TA34 being her German designation, Lenton lists a completely different ship under that designation?
- I think that Lenton's showing his age.
That's all could find. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:24, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- I went a slightly different way on a couple of these. See how well that works.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:05, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- Sure. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:55, 25 September 2019 (UTC)