Talk:French cruiser Troude/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 06:45, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

Pretty minor tweaks needed here:

• suggest lk-on for "2,000 long tons (2,032 t)" to link t
  • Fixed
• "into the Forbin-typeclass"
  • Good catch
• a sentence fragment about the Jeune École doctrine would be good
  • Good idea
• suggest "four other protected cruisers, Amiral Cécille, Jean Bart, and her sister ships Cosmao and Lalande."
  • Done
• "her sister ships Lalande and Cosmao, and the protected cruisers Tage and Suchet."
  • Done
• link Screening (tactical) for screen
  • Done
• "the protected cruiser D'Estrées"
  • Done
• "the protected cruiser Lavoisier"
  • Done
• link naval register
  • Done

That's all I could find, nice job. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:36, 7 June 2020 (UTC)

Thanks! Parsecboy (talk) 10:19, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 22:36, 13 June 2020 (UTC)