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Good articleFrench cruiser Suchet has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starFrench cruiser Suchet is part of the Protected cruisers of France series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
May 11, 2020Good article nomineeListed
October 19, 2021Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 18:16, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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1. Prose  Pass

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Comments

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1.

  • "opening ceremonies for the Bizerte canal " - If this is the name of a specific canal, Canal should be capitalized
    • Good catch
  • "were mounted in sponsoned on" - Unless sponsoned is a technical term, I don't think it's the right word form. Google suggests it's a past tense verb form, which wouldn't be correct for this usage.
    • Fixed
  • "These were placed aft, For close-range" - Either replace the comma with a period, or make it a semicolon and lowercase "For"
    • Apparently I forgot to finish the sentence I started...like I said at the other article, I'm losing my mind
  • Link torpedo boats
    • It's linked earlier
  • "the Venezuelan gunboat Restaurador was on leaving the harbor" - "was on leaving the harbor" doesn't read right.
    • Removed the stray "on"

2.

  • AGF on book sources

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  • Is the namesake known?

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  • Image licensing tags look accurate.

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Not much to do on this one, placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 18:32, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again! Parsecboy (talk) 20:34, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 21:19, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]