Talk:Free Free/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 05:28, 10 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'm Cartoon network freak and I'm checking this article against the good article criteria. CaliforniaDreamsFan, I'm happy to tell you that "Free Free" is close to the GA status. However, you have to implement some little changes within the seven-days-period. Any green text indicates I'm quoting from the article.

Lead

Set a comma after studio album
Remove the word single after was released as the lead
Set a comma after arranged both tracks
Set a comma after singles from her album
Set a comma after "Eropop" and write the words "it" and "containing" after with
Remove the sentence Critical response to "Free Free" was positive; some critics praised the songs composition and highlighted it as a career stand out track., and rewrite it into " 'Free Free' was well-received by music critics, with them praising the song's composition, and highlighting it as a career standout track."
Remove and stayed in there for four weeks., and write instead ", and lasted there for four weeks."
Remove and her last single to reach the limit., and write instead ", and her last single to date to reach this limit."
Remove She went on to performed the single at the 2007 A-Nation concert, performing other songs from her discography and various other small live performances., and re-write it into "Subsequently, she performed the single at the 2007 A-Nation concert. Suzuki went on into singing other songs from her discography at other venues and gigs."
Set a comma after Suzuki's 2011 greatest hits compilation
Set a comma after recording and video, and write the word "on" between and and her
Set a comma after her 2014 greatest hits extended play

Infobox

The cover needs an alternative text

Background and composition

Set a comma after Yasutaka Nakata
Rewrite It is her debut single to be handled by Nakata, and was followed by her June 2008 single "One" and September 2008 single "Can't Stop the Disco". into "It is her first single to be handled by Nataka, and was followed by her June and September 2008 songs "One" and "Can't Stop the Disco", respectively."
Set a comma after Tokyo, Japan
Set the seventh reference after electronic dance music.

Release

Set a comma after Suzuki's sixth studio album
Remove It released in three formats; a stand-alone CD single, a CD and DVD bundle, and a digital download. and write instead "It was released in three different formats: stand-alone CD single, CD/ DVD bundle and digital download."
Remove The CD and digital release contains the two singles, an extended edit of "Free Free" and a radio edit of "Super Music Maker". and rewrite it into "The CD and digital release additionally contains an extended and radio edit of "Free Free" and "Super Music Maker", additionally."
Add the word "an" between releasing and extended
Remove to separate covers, and write instead "two separate cover artworks".

Reception

You should create the sub-topic "Critical response" for the critics' rewiew, and the sub-topic "Commercial performance" forthe text regarding the chart peaks.
selected music critics and reviews -> selected music critics and reviewers
Set CDJournal.com in italics
both "Free Free" and "Super Music Maker" was listed -> both "Free Free" and "Super Music Maker" were listed
Remove An editorial review on the website commended Nakata's collaboration as a "charm" and commended the packaging for her "great sense of fashion". An editorial review on the Japanese Amazon.co.jp website commended the collaboration and felt the musical approach was "exciting". and rewrite into "An editorial review on the webiste labelled Nakata's collaboartion as "charmy". They went on into praising the packaging for Suzuki's "great sense of fashion". Amazon.co.jp (set it in italics) named the collaboration between Nakata and Suzuki as "exciting"."
peaked at thirty-two -> peaked at number thirty-two
at seventeen -> at number-seventeen
Falling outside of the top fifty in its second week, "Free Free" stayed in the top 100 charts for four weeks, her longest charting single since "Like a Love?" with five weeks and eventually tied in with future singles "One" and September 2008 single "Can't Stop the Disco". -> Falling outside the top-fifty in its second charting week, "Free Free" stayed in the top 100 for four weeks, her longest charting single since "Like a Love?" (five weeks). Her future singles "One" and "Can't Stop the Disco" later tied with "Free Free" for the lasted weeks on the chart.
It was her first top forty single inside of the 2007 era and sold over 10,000 units; this is her highest selling single since "Like a Love?" with 16,000 units and her final single to reach over the 10,000 sale limit. -> It was her first top-fourty hit inside the 2007 era, and sold over 10,000 units, her highest-selling single since "Like a Love" (16,000 units). To date, it is Suzuki's final recording to reached the 10,000 sale limit.
According to her sales profile on Oricon, "Free Free" and "Super Music Maker" are ranked at number twenty-one, respectively. -> According to her sales profile on Oricon, the double-single "Free Free" and "Super Music Maker" are both ranked at number twenty-one.}}

Music video

The music video was first premiered -> The music video first premiered
The music video was featured on the DVD version's of the single. -> Additionally, the clip track was featured on the DVD release of "Free Free".
The music video opens with Suzuki's, Nakata's and the songs name and zooms out onto Suzuki. -> The music video opens with Suzuki's, Nakata's and the song's name being zoomed out onto Suzuki.
It shows Suzuki sitting -> It shows her sitting
Rewrite She performed the song at the Passage Summer Festival 2007. into She additionally performed "Free Free" at the Passage Summer Festival 2007.
greatest hits compilation album Ami Selection. -> greatest hits compilation album, Ami Selection
Suzuki's 2014 greatest hits extended play Ami Suzuki Best Selection. -> Suzuki's 2014 greatest hits extended play, Ami Suzuki Best Selection

Formats and track listings

Remove the sentence These are the formats and track listings of major single releases of "Free Free/Super Music Maker".

Personnel

You should rewrite the section into "Credits and personnel"
The sentence Credits adapted from the promotional CD single should be rewritten into "Credits adapted from the liner notes of the promotional CD single, and placed atop the section.

Charts and certifications

Rewrite the section into "Charts and sales"
Rewrite the sub-topic Certifications into "Sales"

Release history

Remove List of release dates by region, including format details, and record label

Status: On-hold for seven days.

A lot to work for you in the seven-day period. But I give you a chance. Good luck! Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:20, 10 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done: @Cartoon network freak: Finished all requirements above, awaiting your response :) CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 01:58, 12 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Well done, @CaliforniaDreamsFan:! "Free Free" is now a GA!

:-) Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) (talk) 10:35 (UTC), 12 September 2015

@Cartoon network freak: Thank you very much for you time!

:-) CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 00:36, 13 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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