Talk:Frederick Seguier Drake/GA1

GA Review

Certified loverboy, certified GA. Arconning · (talk · contribs) 02:13, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 07:04, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Generalissima After reading the article, here are my comments! I can definitely say he's a certified loverboy to his wife Dora 💙. Arconning (talk) 15:07, 18 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Arconning I think I fixed up everything :3 Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 21:36, 18 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Generalissima Just decided to be bold and edit a tiny piece of text out. Everything looks okay and will be passing! Arconning (talk) 02:10, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 15:11, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I will be reviewing this article, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Wonder if this Drake's a certified loverboy too. Arconning (talk · contribs)

Prose and MoS

Lead

was a Chinese-born, just a quick question, is his nationality ambiguous so that Chinese-born British isn't put?
- I could not find a source which explicitly calls him British, even though he certainly was... But it turns out one of the sources I already use calls him English, so, yes much better put. - G
throughout occupation, throughout the occupation. Grammatically correct originally but that's just my suggestion^^ It's alright if not followed.
- Flows better with a the, I think you're right. - G
by which point Drake, change by to at.
- Good point. - G
a position as the Professor of Chinese Studies, remove the.
- Fixed. - G
and foundation of what would become the University Museum and Art Gallery., add the before foundation.
- Fixed. - G

Biography lead

On 13 April, 1892,, remove comma after April. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Dates and numbers#Formats.
- Oops, yeah. Fixied. - G
He was enrolled in the University of London, replace in with at.
- Fixed. - G
Drake thought favorably of the experience, and, remove comma.

Japanese occupation

while Dora and the child remained in England., no problems with the sentence, just think it's funny to put their son as "the child". True enough so no issues with it.
Possibly say the reason why the major anti-British political campaign happened, most likely because of the Tientsin incident.

Chinese Civil War and aftermath

after the end of the war,, remove comma.
- Fixed. - G
it as a "island held by guerrillas [...] , an island.
- Fixed. - G

Hong Kong

He died on 21 August, 1974., remove comma per Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Dates and numbers#Formats.
- Fixed. - G

Published works

Never seen this type of section but the formatting looks great to me. Image supplied is great! (Maybe put a lang-zh and pinyin template).
- That is a lang-zh template :3

Refs

Good sources, first time seeing a Bible verse as a note properly!

Spotchecks

Manual and automated spotcheck show nothing. Pass.

Images

Images have proper licenses and have suitable captions!

Misc.

Broad information about the main topic, no ongoing edit war, focused on the topic. Really nice work!

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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