Talk:Fred Keenor/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:05, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR 19:05, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
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[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- "He began his football career at his hometown club Cardiff City after impressing in a trial match in 1912 that was organised by his former schoolteacher" - who did he impress?
- The infobox image needs a caption
- "Keenor, himself a patriotic man" - try himself a patriot instead
- "made 21 appearances in the league during the season, scoring 2 goals" - two goals
- "being transported to an army hospital in Dublin, Ireland" - no need to have 'Ireland' here, I'm sure everybody knows Dublin
- " After the Final, Keenor stated: "Just because we lost in our very first Cup Final, I don't think there is any cause to get down in the mouth. I can say here and now that one day soon our followers can be sure that Cardiff City will bring that cup to Wales."" - any reason why this quote is italicised?
- The 'general' subsection in the references should be renamed "bibliography" preferably, but feel free to ignore
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- No original research found.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
The article is well written, comprehensive, and all of the sources check out fine. Once all of those minor prose issues I listed have dealt with then this should pass. It's been a pleasure to review this. JAGUAR 16:54, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
- @Jaguar: Thanks very much for the review, I think I've fixed all those points. Kosack (talk) 17:23, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for that! I've checked through the article again and am happy that this meets the criteria now. Well done JAGUAR 17:24, 25 November 2016 (UTC)