Talk:Franz Kline
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Sarahmooiweer (talk) 16:13, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
For what its worth
[edit]Kline was baptized at birth and confirmed in an episcopal church in 1926...Modernist (talk) 01:21, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi Sarah! Your outline looks really good so far. You may have already been thinking about these, but I just wanted to add a few things that might be important to include/elaborate on:
– Childhood influence, specifically growing up in a coal mining town, and how that impacted his style
– His view of gestural painting as a means to create physical form and presence
– Influence on the Minimalist sculptors
Sjs1994 (talk) 05:30, 23 March 2015 (UTC)
General suggestions for improvement
[edit]Nicely-written article. Fluidly written and well-cited. Still a few suggestions:
- some missing citations
- would love to see a slightly more in-depth discussion of 1-2 well-known or particularly influential works; this *would give the article depth
- needs copy editing and cleanup, especially for economy of language and diction (for example, "This exploration back to color-use was still in development when Kline died in 1962"). Aolivex (talk) 18:25, 24 April 2015 (UTC)
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