Talk:Frank Palmer (businessman)

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Did you know... that Frank Palmer started in the advertising business on April 1, 1969, and retired 50 years later to the day?

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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:00, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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... that Frank Palmer retired from business exactly after 50 years service? Source: [1]
- ALT1:... that Frank Palmer entered in to advertising business on April 1, 1969 and left on the exact date after 50 years? Source: [2]

Created by Captain Assassin! (talk). Self-nominated at 06:27, 2 November 2019 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Overall, a really good article that I enjoyed reading. Nice work, Captain Assassin! ~~Per a QPQ check, however, it looks like the nominator needs to provide a QPQ, which has not been done yet~~. I have a slight preference for ALT1 as the hook, but the main hook is good, too. ~~Once QPQ is done, I'll be happy to pass this nomination~~. Once again, nice work! Michael Barera (talk) 03:49, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Michael Barera: Side comment: Does ALT1 sound a bit off grammatically? Specifically "entered in to advertising" --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:05, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Michael Barera: Thanks for your comment. I will provide a QPQ done asap. --Captain Assassin! ^{«T ♦ C ♦ G»} 07:09, 7 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@MrLinkinPark333: Sorry to be slow in replying. Something like "entered the advertising business" or "began a career in advertising" might be a more natural alternative to "entered in to advertising", perhaps. Michael Barera (talk) 04:58, 13 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Michael Barera: No worries! I thought I should mention it as a drive-by comment once I read it to prevent any errors. But, since you're the reviewer, you have the last say :) --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:25, 13 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

- ALT1a:... that Frank Palmer started in the advertising business on April 1, 1969, and retired on April 1 fifty years later? --evrik ^(talk) 00:05, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I am donating my QPQ of Diversity ideologies. --evrik ^(talk) 00:05, 5 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you, evrik! I am now passing this DYK. Also, my preference is for evrik's hook ALT1a. Michael Barera (talk) 15:16, 8 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]