Talk:Frank Mestnik

Frank Mestnik has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: October 31, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:13, 31 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 17:15, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:15, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

He was a multi-sport athlete there, you can drop "there" as it is already implied
as they finished, "they" -> "the team"
What was the result of the 1960 College All-Star game?
He made the Cardinals' roster and appeared in nine games, four to five as a starter,[a] as a rookie, being their second-leading rusher and fifth-leading point scorer with 104 carries for 429 yards (a 4.1 average) and three touchdowns; he also caught three passes for 24 yards and returned three kickoffs for 39 yards as St. Louis went 6–5–1, there is a lot happening in this sentence. Recommend breaking it up into 2 or 3 sentences.
National Football League Players Association can be shortened to "NFL Players Association" since you stated the acronym in the lead
Ref spot check: 5, 7, 13, 17, 18, 22

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:47, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: Issues addressed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:24, 31 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:12, 31 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.