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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 11:39, 10 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

General
Info box
  • Use the release and length templates.
Lead
  • It needs to be mentioned that Buena left because it's confusing to read about her writing a verse about her daughter but to see a picture of Berrabah on the artwork.
Composition and theme
  • Per WP:CITEKILL, "Musically, "Follow Me Home" is a downtempo[6] electropop[5] and R&B ballad.[7]" you a probably best to just put all three citations together at the end of the sentence.
Line-up change and release
Critical reception
  • This section is very quote like, it needs to have more flow so put some of them into your own words or reduce the amount of the quote you use and combine it with your own words.
Music video
  • This could be a two paragraph section to be honest, three is too much.
  • Put the picture on the right hand side.
  • The first paragraph has no flow and is full of abrupt stops. It's very jarring to read. Make use of comma's and reword the sentences to make them flow into each other. It reads like a list of facts at the moment.
Credits and personnel
  • Put this section above the Charts section
References
Status

On hold for 7 days.  — AARONTALK 12:30, 13 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Calvin I fixed the problems Till 14:02, 13 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Passing.  — AARONTALK 19:47, 14 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.