Talk:Fire (Big Sean song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 18:56, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
General overview[edit]
Disambiguation links (per Dablinks)[edit]
- No disambiguation links to correct.
External links (per Checklinks)[edit]
- No exteral links to correct.
Usage of files in article[edit]
- Cover artwork has a valid rationale that allows usage in article.
- Image included in Background and composition section is a bit irrelevant to the article. Are there images of the song's composers uploaded in Wiki[Commons] or Flickr?
Not done, unfortunately there were no pictures on Commons for the songwriters, except for one picture of Big Sean that I feel like not be a free work. I did, however, expand the caption for Kanye so it ties in a little better with the section its in.
- The non-free image of Cyrus is unnecessary. An image of Cyrus as she appears live and in music videos nowadays would suffice.
Done
Original research; reliable sourcing[edit]
- WP:OR is not present; sources are reliable except for an instance in Music video, referenced in "Prose, redundancies and visual aspect".
Prose, redundancies and visual aspect[edit]
Introduction[edit]
- Remove "hip hop" from "American [...] recording artist" and instead reference the song's musical style in the end of the paragraph.
Done
- When saying "component chart" you should say "component chart to the US Billboard Hot 100".
Done
Background and composition[edit]
- "When describing his second studio album Hall of Fame (2013) in December 2012, Big Sean stated that he wished to "teach and leave a legacy" with its tracks, admitting that the content on his debut record Finally Famous (2011) "didn't really teach too much."" → irrelevant to the matter; should be in the song's parent album article.
- I feel like this would be nice to have in this article though, since the song describes overcoming difficulties and I think it helps to explain the fairly sudden shift to more mature lyrics.
- Leak is a bit casual, I think. Could you change that to "surface"?
Done
Music video[edit]
- VideoStatic is not reliable. Find another source, please.
Done
Charts[edit]
- When saying "component chart" you should say "component chart to the US Billboard Hot 100".
Done
References[edit]
- R3 — Amazon.com needs to be wikilinked.
Done
Comments[edit]
Second read-through[edit]
- TBC.
Comments[edit]
- Another well done article. prism △ 18:56, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review! Sorry I couldn't get to it earlier, I was a bit busy the last few days. WikiRedactor (talk) 18:56, 11 January 2014 (UTC)
- No problem! Passing right now, keep up the good work. prism △ 21:19, 11 January 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review! Sorry I couldn't get to it earlier, I was a bit busy the last few days. WikiRedactor (talk) 18:56, 11 January 2014 (UTC)