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Neutrality of the introduction

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The introduction seems to be to written from the perspective of one who is advocating the ideas portrayed in the film, as in the following phrases:

"... Spiritual Activism that is catalyzing the planet."
"... to reveal what is possible when individuals, friends and strangers, faced with a world in crisis, rise to their absolute best."

I think it should be possible to describe the film's content, and even it's social impact, in more neutral language. Davnor (talk) 22:16, 4 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ideas for expanding the article

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I have just finished watching and was moved enough to see the article as a point of reference to the issues & actions & the people involved, to inform just as wikipedia was intended (in my mind anyway ;)). I have started by expanding the list of interviewees & added:

Others featured include Michael Beckwith,  Sera Beak, , ..

I think a list format with brief bio-data would serve best.

I will update in increments. Please don't wait with your improvements for me to find the time to continue-dive in please (or perhaps stay NEUTRAL & not write :) & may the Dharma punks et al get to you as 'they' have me in Peru.

Un abrazo DadaNeem (talk) 19:41, 17 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]